FEEDBACK NEEDED: new bookmarks

I’m on the final batch of Poet’s Haven bookmarks, and will be getting new ones printed soon.  I’ve decided to redesign them, so that rather than using clip art images (even clip art images that I customized), we have one design that uses my graffiti cat logo.  These are going to get used for some more… guerrilla style promotional campaigns than what The Poet’s Haven has used thusfar.  (This is something I’ll be asking for some street team help to implement.  More on this later.)  I’d like to know what y’all think of this design.  Is the rotating text distracting, or does it work?  Is there a better way to word things?  Should I include anything else on here?  Things like that.  Please take a look and let me know what you think.



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  • VertigoXX

    UPDATES: Two changes have been made thanks to your suggestions. Keroywn suggested switching the rotated text so that the longer line was over the lower case “m” in rather than over the larger, upper case “P.” The graffiti cat has been moved just a bit so that its ear isn’t so close to the “e” in “Haven.”

    Thanks, and keep the feedback coming!

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